My goal this year is to achieve most of my writing levels in level 4 and my strength is vocabulary and my weakness is punctuation.
What I'm looking forward to this year as hockey festival and The leadership award at the end of the year. I look up to Gemma Flynn because she's a famous hockey player.I like to posts my learning on seesaw to show my learning to others and they can give me feedback.
Great when's the festival on. I think it's in the holidays.
ReplyDeleteHi Stella, this is a great piece of writing you have writen, I like the bit when you said what your goals are, and the person ( Gemma flynn.) is the person who inspires you. I liked the part when you wrote 'my favirout sport is Hockey ,and dance.' Maybe you could work on your punctuation a bit.
ReplyDeleteKia ora, I am Ropata from Riverdale School.
ReplyDeleteI really liked the story how you write it out.
I learnt that she likes to swim at the baech during summer.
Maybe you should work on your fullstops.
If you would like to see my learning visit my blog <a href="https “http://”riverdalegisropatai.blogspot.com”>here</a>
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Kia ora, I am metuisela from Te Hapara School.
ReplyDeleteI really liked learning a lot of stuff on my chromebook that i never new I could do.
I learnt that how to make a link but i can’t rember how to make a link
I really love making a our avater it was hard but it was fun.
If you would like to see my learning visit my blog <a href="https://thsmetuiselav.blogspot.com/”>here</a>
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