10 Pin Bowling

Describing how I felt in the story, and what I did. 

The exciting part of this story was including all the fun times in napier which I chose one and that was this story.
My challenges when writing this was probably adding the bits we did because it was quite hard to remember them.

My Writing

10 Pin Bowling - by Stella 

As Margie, Rick, Hattie, Joe and I arrived at 10 pin bowling, I was as excited as me getting a birthday present!

The area had just been re-done so it was extremely flash.

After we signed in we went over to get our bowling bowls and shoes, a moment later, we started, at that point I was going 3rd.

The cons were that everybody was staring at us.

Finally it was my time to shine, frantically I stood up and trudged to the starting line. Bowling shoes are really slippery so I nearly fell backwards! I gave the ball some swing and let it go.

Seconds later I got a gutter but it was only my first time. 

Besides that I could not believe my eyes, Rick got a strike on his first try! Therefore Joe was so confident that he was going to get a strike but instead he only knocked over 4 pins. I was laughing so hard that that my head nearly popped of!

In the end Rick came 1st Hattie and Joe tied 2nd, Margie came 4th and I came last, but it was so fun anyway.