Friday, 8 June 2018

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My name is Stella, I like to go to the beach and swim in the sea. My school is Makauri. I live in Gisborne.  My favorite sport is hockey and I love dancing. A fact about me is that I have auburn hair. My favorite season is summer because you can swim in the beach and that's one of my favorite things to do.

My goal this year is to achieve most of my writing levels in level 4 and my strength is vocabulary and my weakness is punctuation.

What I'm looking forward to this year as hockey festival and The leadership award at the end of the year. I look up to Gemma Flynn because she's a famous hockey player.I like to posts my learning on seesaw to show my learning to others and they can give me feedback. 

5 comments:

  1. Great when's the festival on. I think it's in the holidays.

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  2. Hi Stella, this is a great piece of writing you have writen, I like the bit when you said what your goals are, and the person ( Gemma flynn.) is the person who inspires you. I liked the part when you wrote 'my favirout sport is Hockey ,and dance.' Maybe you could work on your punctuation a bit.

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  3. Kia ora, I am Ropata from Riverdale School.
    I really liked the story how you write it out.
    I learnt that she likes to swim at the baech during summer.
    Maybe you should work on your fullstops.
    If you would like to see my learning visit my blog <a href="https “http://”riverdalegisropatai.blogspot.com”>here</a>

    Mā te wā
    Ropata

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  4. Kia ora, I am metuisela from Te Hapara School.
    I really liked learning a lot of stuff on my chromebook that i never new I could do.
    I learnt that how to make a link but i can’t rember how to make a link
    I really love making a our avater it was hard but it was fun.
    If you would like to see my learning visit my blog <a href="https://thsmetuiselav.blogspot.com/”>here</a>

    Mā te wā
    metuisela

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